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Terrell- Terrell
Crock- Ice cube
Terrell’s mom- Whitney Houston
Tommy- Jonah Hill
Tommy’s mom- Betty White
https://www.writerduet.com/script#M3DMV
Tuesday, May 30, 2017
Tommy D'Ascoli- The City
In this action thriller about a boy who grew up in a racist area of Northern New Jersey, a heartwarming tale of turning discrimination into acceptance. Tommy, through experiencing the tough reality of living in NYC, learns a valuable lesson in acceptance and compassion. Through twists and turns and ups and downs Tommy learns that he has to use his mouth for good and not evil. Tommy meets a lot of cool people who help him along his journey.
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You accomplished the intention, "To show the different slang that is used in urban areas versus suburban areas by having Terrell talk differently with his friends than Tommy" by including different language for Terrell's parts. One example of this is when Terrell is talking to C Rock and he says "You's been holding down this block..."
ReplyDeleteHe accomplished his second intention by having Tommy experience Terrell's life in the city.
ReplyDeleteTom accomplished his intention of having Terrell talk with slang through out the script.
ReplyDeletetom completed his intention by having Terrell talk in slang for the entire script.
ReplyDeleteAbe Ancis: The story perfectly displays the dichotomy of living in the hood versus living in suburbia. This is perfectly demonstrated through the langue that is used. The cover art exemplifies the stereotypical archetype that is expected from someone that lives in the hood or urban areas.
ReplyDeleteThe intentions that you put down for your story were accomplished in your script.
ReplyDeleteWas able to show the comparison between life in an urban place versus life in a suburban place through Tommy's experiences throughout the story.
ReplyDeleteMet goal #2 by having Tommy shoot a gun, showing how life is different in urban areas from suburban areas.
ReplyDeleteYou accomplished your third intention by at the they all play basketball together.
ReplyDeleteAccurately showed the difference between the different types of environments (rural vs suburbs) and also adding in slang to the dialogue helped the setting.
ReplyDeleteMet all 3 of the intentions in the screenplay
ReplyDeleteTommy's choice to have Terrell to speak differently when he is in different settings allowed him to accomplish his second intention.
ReplyDeleteBy incorporating slang throughout the screenplay we see the differences of a suburban vs urban area
ReplyDeleteUsed different slang and violent actions to help show the difference between certain environments.
ReplyDeleteUsed slang in his dialogue from both suburban areas and urban areas which was easy to compare especially with the descriptive action blocks.
ReplyDeleteGood job showing the difference between urban and suburban
ReplyDeleteUsed variety of violent actions and slang to show the changes in the environment such as urban and suburban.
ReplyDeleteUsed variety of violent actions and slang to show the changes in the environment such as urban and suburban.
ReplyDeleteYou could definitely see the difference between suburban and urban when he uses slang for the urban areas vs. how they talk in suburban areas .
ReplyDeleteachieved your first intention by using different slang in the dialogue, word choice was very clearly chosen
ReplyDeleteYou accomplished an intention by having Terrell use slang terms through out the entire story.
ReplyDeleteThe different slang in the dialogue helped show the difference of rural and suburban which accomplished your first goal. Having Tommy shoot a gun showed that you accomplished your second goal.
ReplyDeleteHis second intention was accomplished through Tommy seeing what Terrell's life in the city. He also achieved his first intention by showing the different uses of slang from two totally different areas.
ReplyDeleteThe choice in language, specifically referring to the slang within the script, Tommy was able to sell Terrell's life in the city with accuracy which added to the overall effect
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