A typical high school teenage girl, Athena, had a normal life and a normal family until she discovers the skeletons in her father’s deep dark hidden closet. Her father’s dark past comes back to haunt them. She is followed by a mysterious man who follows her every move. He ultimately kidnaps her leaving her in an unknown place left with unknown people. Athena is left with unanswered questions which leave her asking herself if she knew who her father really was. Figuring out her father’s past, She takes risks that no other teenage girl would take. She needs to become a lone fighter to save herself from her kidnappers. It is up to Athena to resolve his hidden past and put things back in order. The action packed Kidnapped will have you at the edge of your seat. Will she escape her father’s past?
Ideal Cast
Athena- India Eisley
Andreas- Christian Navarro
Dad-Jeffrey Dean Morgen
Unknown man-Vinnie Jones
Student Cast
Athena- Maeve Mcveigh
Andreas-Ben Curras
Dad- Eric Lesch
Unknown man- Mr. Rivers
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Abe Ancis: Her fathers affiliation with the mafia causes the down fall of his daughters physical and mental well being. By the end of the story Athena is left all alone in the cold with two murders on her hands. In some ways she is now almost like her father. An assassin. The cover art conveys the message of struggle perfectly.
ReplyDeleteMet goal #1 by building up suspense and creating cliffhangers that leave the reader in anticipation of what will happen next. This keeps the reader very interested.
ReplyDeleteThe screenplay has suspense and the audience feels it. She put characters through tough situations and left with with murders.
ReplyDeleteThe situations that the characters were put through made the screenplay very suspenseful and interesting to read
ReplyDeleteGood job creating suspense through the situations they have to go through
ReplyDeletegreat job creating a sense of suspense, especially during the cliff hanger at the end of the screenplay
ReplyDeleteThis was so interesting and intense. I hate cliffhangers myself but it definitely created suspense!
ReplyDeleteThe suspense was very prevalent throughout the screenplay and the cliff hanger at the end was a good touch.
ReplyDeleteThrough different situations suspense was created and left the audience wanting more especially with an unresolved ending.
ReplyDeleteYour story created lots of suspense and kept readers on the edge of their seats.
ReplyDeleteThe story had lots of suspense prevalent through out. It kept my interest and having a courageous main character accomplished your third intention.
ReplyDeleteHaving the daughter have two murders on her hands accomplished the third intention characterizing a courageous main character by putting them through tough situations.
ReplyDeleteScreenplay did a good job of building suspense. Suspense was continuing to grow through the entire screenplay through both action blocks and dialogue.
ReplyDeleteMet her second goal by having a cliff hanger at the end of the story which helped create suspense.
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ReplyDeleteLots of suspense throughout the story. She used the cliffhanger very well. Met goal 2.
ReplyDeletecliffhanger made suspense.
ReplyDeleteAll of the goals were accomplished. the screenplay was very suspenseful throughout the entire screenplay.
ReplyDeleteVery suspenseful throughout story. The cliffhanger at the end definitely contributed to the suspense of the screenplay.
ReplyDeleteHer screenplay had a lot of suspense in it and the audience could feel that tone. Using a cliff hanger made it even more of a suspenseful feeling.
ReplyDeleteAll goals were met naturally and with great flow. The suspense was well dispersed throughout the story with an obvious tone which the audience can pick up.
ReplyDeleteGoals were met, also the story was very suspenseful and thrilling.
ReplyDeleteAll the goals were met at the story progressed and suspense was created multiple times.
ReplyDeletesuspense throughout the story made it interesting to read
ReplyDeleteAccomplished goal 1 by creating a suspenseful tone through the screenplay. You left the reader on the edge of their seat waiting on whats going to happen next.
ReplyDeletecreated suspense with leaving open ending or cliffhanger
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