Student Cast
Brody- Mr. Rivers
Pip- Jacey Deleu
Mom- Joanna Muino
Johnny- Julie Oelkers
The Adventures of Finding a Home is a touching story of a lonely dog named Brody who was abandoned by his previous owners leaving him on the sidewalks of Central Park. Brody spends all his days spending time at park and over his time he meet his best friend Pip, a funky pidgin who helps Brody and sticks by him through the journey. Brody was talking to Pip when he explains that he wants something more than just a sad life alone at the park. He always looks over at owners and their dogs having fun at the park and Brody comes to the conclusion that he wants what those dogs have and realizes he needs to work for it if he so he can get what he want. So he asked Pip to help him. The two characters go through a bunch of ups and downs all for one thing in the end, finding the perfect family.
I would recommend this short film to audiences because it really does show the importance of friendship. The story ties in life lessons from never give up, to trusting yourself all while being light hearted and a little bit silly! It would be a great short film for kids to watch and I feel like they can remember the lessons that are shown through the film as they grow.
Nice use of dialogue and actions of Pip to emphasize the importance of friendship. Pips help in finding Brody a home shows how god of friends they are.
ReplyDeleteDianna created the characters personalities throughout the screenplay by saying their feelings and how they were saying were saying the dialogue.
ReplyDeleteDianna did a good creating the characters personalities by explaining their feelings and showing their emotions.
ReplyDeletemet goal #2 by showing how good of a friend Pip is to Brody by helping him finally find a home.
ReplyDeleteYou accomplished meeting your second goal by the ending when Brody found a happy home.
ReplyDeleteBY having the characters outright say their feelings she is able to accomplish her goal of creating different personalities to show the audience that they are two different pets.
ReplyDeleteThe second goal was accomplished by the happy ending when Brody found a home
ReplyDeleteThe different personalities are shown through the pets actions and feelings throughout the story.
ReplyDeleteAll goals were accomplished and the theme of friendship was shown throughout the entire screenplay.
ReplyDeleteThe screenplay did a good job of portraying how there are different kinds of pets through the animals' actions
ReplyDeleteYou achieved the theme of friendship by having the pets support each other and Pip helping Brody find a home.
ReplyDeleteAbe Ancis: The story creates a heart warming tone by creating not only a relationship between the two animals but the desire to belong to a loving family.
ReplyDeleteGoal #2 was met by showing the importance of the theme of friendship. This was done through the friendship of Brody and Pip. Without Pip's help, Brody wouldn't have found his forever home.
ReplyDeleteIntention 2 was hit by showing how important friendship is.
ReplyDeletethe second intention was met because you could clearly see how important the friendship was between the pets.
ReplyDeleteNice use of dialogue between characters, felt different emotions towards each (goal #3). Also the creation of the friendship between Brody and Pip is bittersweet and shows how friendship is an important role in your screenplay (goal#2)
ReplyDeleteYou accomplished your second goal with your ending.
ReplyDeleteGoal 2 was met due to the fact that you can clearly see the friendship theme. It's most noticeable between Pip and Brody.
ReplyDeleteHaving Pip be such a good friend to Brody by having him find a home accomplished his second goal. The personalities of the characters were given throughout the dialogue which showed their emotion and helped the audience see that Pip is a good friend.
ReplyDeleteShe was able to meet goal two by showing how Pip is a great friend to Brody by helping him get a home at the end.
ReplyDeleteThere is a touching friendship theme between the two friends Pip and Brody. Especially in the end when Brody finally gets a home.
ReplyDeleteBrody and Pips relationship turned into a critical point as it was intended in goal 2. This was necessary to create the theme of friendship.
ReplyDeleteAccomplishes her goal of conveying the friendship growing and creating a bond.
ReplyDeleteshe accomplished her second goal with Brody.
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