In this short film May 2 written and produced by Terrell Smith tells an altered story based on true events on four friends in highschool trying to find plans for the weekend. It depicts some problems that high schoolers may have when going to a high school party. It shows problems like friendships being tested, seeing if they stick together or split up during the trials they go through. Second the story shows how characters struggle to get to there goal safely. Lastly the story tries to convey that things don’t go the way it’s planned out shown thru the characters trying to get home or lying to their parents.
In the story four friends try to find something to do over the weekend. The four friends Terrell, Tommy, Kyle, and Danny sit in the cafeteria and plan. Tommy steps ups and invites them to his house. Other plans f come up there’s the option of going to Tommy’s houses or or going to the party of the year. There’s one problem not all four friends are invited at first, Tommy was the only friend not invited. Three of the friends Terrell, Danny, and Kyle are invited and try , and succeed on getting the fourth friend invited. After the first problem was over Terrell struggles to lie to his parents on where he’s going and where he will be all night. The friends end up all making it to the party, but an unexpected turn happens. The cops show up to the party, and it becomes a free for all everyone scatters going into the woods. The friends all run out the door trying not to get caught. As the boys run into the woods they will not now what will happen next, and if they will make it home.
Ideal Cast
Will Smith as Terrell
Ice Cube as Tommy
Michael Pena as Danny
Benedict Cumberbatch as Kyle
Muggsy Bougues as Burt
Eminem as Austin
Oprah Winfrey as Terrell's mom
Bruce Willis as Tommy's dad
Ideal Cast
Will Smith as Terrell
Ice Cube as Tommy
Michael Pena as Danny
Benedict Cumberbatch as Kyle
Muggsy Bogues as Burt
Eminem as Austin
Oprah Winfrey as Terrell’s Mom
Bruce Willis as Tommy’s Dad
Ideal Cast
Will Smith as Terrell
Ice Cube as Tommy
Michael Pena as Danny
Benedict Cumberbatch as Kyle
Muggsy Bogues as Burt
Eminem as Austin
Oprah Winfrey as Terrell’s Mom
Bruce Willis as Tommy’s Dad
Ideal Cast
Will Smith as Terrell
Ice Cube as Tommy
Michael Pena as Danny
Benedict Cumberbatch as Kyle
Muggsy Bogues as Burt
Eminem as Austin
Oprah Winfrey as Terrell’s Mom
Bruce Willis as Tommy’s Dad
You accomplished the intention "To create suspense, and thrill of not knowing what’s next, by showing the characters struggling to get home" by surprising the audience when the cop shows up. It creates suspense and thrill.
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ReplyDeleteyou created suspense by having the characters struggle to get home.
ReplyDeleteHe accomplished his third goal because the cops come to the house party and all of the kids have to flee into the woods.
ReplyDeleteAbe Ancis: The story adequately conveys paranoia and fear as shown when the cops arrive at the party leaving the friends and other party goers in panic. The story somewhat reminds me of project X but with a brotherly bond attached.
ReplyDeleteAll 3 intentions were achieved, and you really showed how a good thing can become bad in a matter of moments.
ReplyDeleteAccurately showed how the night was quickly turned around due to cops creating a suspenseful story.
ReplyDeleteHe was able to accomplish his third goal by having the cops show up which forces all of the kids into a frenzy as they try to run away.
ReplyDeleteTo meet goal #3 he had everything change very quickly once the cops show up as the kids all try and get away.
ReplyDeleteThere were times where some dialogue was unnecessary. Also you achieved on creating suspense all through out your screenplay
ReplyDeleteHe showed how situations can change instantly just because of the cops. He also accurately described and set the scene of a high school party.
ReplyDeleteThe cops created a struggle which added fear and suspense to the story.
ReplyDeleteHaving the cops come while the party was in action created suspense as well as met his third goal
ReplyDeleteBecause the cops came to the party, this shows that things can go terribly wrong and turn upside down, as well as create a feeling of suspense.
ReplyDeleteGood job acomplishing your goal by making the night turn bad quickly.
ReplyDeleteThe third goal was accomplished. He had the cops show up which made all of the kids run away. Creating suspense.
ReplyDeleteHe met goal number 3 by making the cops show up and the kids wind up fleeing. This leads to suspense and thrill
ReplyDeleteGoal #3 was clearly achieved by showing how cops can cause chaos with kids fleeing everywhere
ReplyDeleteSuspense was created by having the characters struggle to get home.
ReplyDeleteYou accomplished your third goal because the cops arrived at the party. You also accomplished your second goal by creating suspense when you and your friends were at the top of a hill and a cop was trying to find you guys.
ReplyDeleteyou did a great job creating suspense throughout the play, which was your third goal. When the cops arrived and even hiding on the hill, both scenes created suspense.
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ReplyDeleteBy have the police come, this helped Terrell accomplish his goals and take a turn for the worst. This added necessary suspense to the story.
ReplyDeleteAccomplished goal by having things turn badly
ReplyDeleteaccomplished third goal by having police come
ReplyDeleteaccomplished goal by having the night turn pretty bad fast quick.
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