In the slapstick comedy produced by Mike Freeman the gang is traveling to their first concert to celebrate their upcoming graduation. The group decides to see their favorite artist Cold play. The group soon finds out that their first concert would be one for the books with many curveballs and plot twists that lead the group to finding a hidden talent and a secret from an unsuspected character. The Group has to get past being split up at a concert to finding out their mentor and favorite gym teacher has a secret that is extremely important that cannot be released. Terrell has to make a gut decision on weather or not to keep his coaches secret.
The script begins in school when Mike informs the group that they will be attending a big concert and that his dad got them tickets for free. The group packs their things an gets prepared for the trip. While at the concert the group splits up and experiences different paths. Terrell finds himself lost in the portapotty while Tom finds his way backstage to have the performance opportunity of a lifetime. Will the group find each other before the concert completes? Will Tom ace his first live performance? Will Devin finally find the friends she deserves?
Ideal cast:
Tom- Adam Brody
Terrell- Justin Chambers
Devin- Blake Lively
Mike- Matt Czuchry
Coach Slobozian- Channing Tatum
Mr. Rivers- Kit Harington
Chris Martin- Josh Duhamel
Link to Movie: https://drive.google.com/a/sparta.org/file/d/0B7Q3217mNRdjUmFlY2lHNXFLZ1k/view?usp=sharing
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ReplyDeleteAccurately represented how Tom is very random and surprising by having him come out on stage with Chris Martin and surprising all his friends. His randomness is shown through a lot of Tom's dialogue.
ReplyDeleteAccurately portrayed all of your goals. Especially how mean you guys were to Devin throughout the story.
ReplyDeleteThe script was very interesting and entertaining. The goals were all met within the script. In other words the script did exactly what it wanted to, making it successful.
ReplyDeleteIn the screenplay, it is very evident that Devin hates her friends but still chooses to be with them. She made new friends but still decided to be with the guys even though they are awful for them. This intention was completed successfully.
ReplyDelete-Devin Gozdenovich
You achieved the intention "I want to have the group be very mean to devin and not nice for no reason" by having the group say rude and demeaning things to Devin. The guys in the script said to Devin multiple times, "We don't want you here." This accomplished the intention of being mean to her.
ReplyDeleteMike did a good job of getting his intention of hating Devin, and Tom's randomness in the story. He stayed true to those intention throughout the whole story.
ReplyDeleteAll intentions were achieved and used through the script.
ReplyDeleteGoal #2 was accomplished by having everyone, especially Mikey, be mean to Devin, constantly degrading her and making her seem unimportant to the friend group. In addition her new friends were also rude to her
ReplyDeleteMike this was surprisingly very interesting and a very accurate representation of all the characters. All intentions were meet and the screenplay was well written.
ReplyDeleteIntentions were well executed and the plot and screenplay were very specific. The whole story had a purpose and was entertaining to read.
ReplyDeleteMike was able to really accomplish every single one of his intentions. He did a really good job and I liked how different it was. It was really funny. Good job Mike.
ReplyDeleteMike accomplishes all his goals through out the entire story. The group is brutally mean to Devin and she just takes it as well as Tom being a random and comedic character during the entire story.
ReplyDeleteHe met intention 2 by having everyone, even her new friends, hate Devin.
ReplyDeleteI was happy that I got to sing the finale for Sammy Slobozian, mike hit every intention.
ReplyDeleteMikey effectively and thoroughly hit his expectations throughout his screen play. Specifically he hit his first intention well by accurately representing how Tom is by making him very random and surprising throughout the entire story with things such as cold play, etc.
ReplyDeleteMike was able to really accomplish every single one of his intentions. I loved how random it was. Adding Slobo as one of the characters added a nice touch. It made it a lot more funny that it was him because you would not expect him to be at a concert
ReplyDeleteYou accomplished your first intention by having Tom be random throughout the screenplay such as him bringing tickets to go see Coldplay.
ReplyDeleteThe intentions are well accomplished in the screenplay and dialogue helps to show how everyone shuns Devin and doesn't like him for no reason.
ReplyDeleteHe really accomplished his third intention by all the friends being terribly mean to Devin and she just basically accepts it.
ReplyDeleteHis third intention was greatly met through the meanness to Devin throughout the whole screenplay
ReplyDeleteAbe Ancis: Mike perfectly executed every single intention. The comedic tone was well put together while still reaching the random comedic events that I loved.
ReplyDeleteGood use of Toms dialogue and actions to show how random he is.
ReplyDeleteHe met all of his intentions in the screenplay by showing how random Tom is, and having all of Devin's friends be mean to her.
ReplyDeleteHis second goal was met because everyone was mean and rude to Devin. The rude comments even from people she just met made the story even more enjoyable to read. Tom’s randomness throughout the story accomplished his first intention.
ReplyDeleteHe accomplished his third attention through dialogue and action.
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