This story is based off of a dumb running joke my friends and I have been saying. The title will be the “World’s Biggest CH” or just “CH”. The joke is that a “CH” is someone who acts unusually or out of the ordinary / at random. “CH” being pronounced “che”. The basis of the story is two or three friends searching for the world’s biggest ch. The 5 characters in the story are Eric Lesch, Premal Patel, Brandon Dreher, Matt Abastonte, and Elias Frieling. The conflict will be that a friend gets locked behind a door. The door closes and it is found that the door can not be opened without the help of “World’s Biggest Ch”. The problem is there are so many chs in the world it seems almost impossible to find the world’s biggest one. The characters will go on a journey to find this person and keep failing over and over again in the attempt to open this door. At first the characters did not know what exactly a ch really was, but throughout their adventure the figure exactly what it is. They search all over. They search cabinets, schools, airports, sporting events. Almost everything that you could think of that has large amounts of people. The characters begin to get into a conflict within themselves. They become way to impatient and they don't want to continue. Two characters want to give up, but one of them gets them back into the adventure. Then when they are at the brink of defeat and about to give up, they run into a person that they know for sure is the one.
Ideal Cast
Brandon- as himself
Premal- as himself
Eric- as himself
The World’s Biggest Ch- Matt
Elias-as himself
He created a dramatic tone by choosing intense suspenseful music.
ReplyDeleteGood clip and way to complete intention of having climax at the end with the music and clips.
ReplyDeleteThe last intention was accomplished because there was a climax at the end.
ReplyDeleteThe editing of the video was really good and very cinematic, creating a lot of drama.
ReplyDeleteBy having the screen be black while hearing all the voices, you achieved the intention "nd the last intention is to edit my video in a way that I have the climax of the trailer at the end, to have people on the edge of their seats looking for more." The whole class was in suspense.
ReplyDeleteOne choice that Eric made that helped with his intentions was to execute good camera cuts and edits in order to make a suspense atmosphere.
ReplyDeleteThe tone was dramatic with the music which made the trailer much more exciting and interesting
ReplyDeleteThe climax of the trailer was at the end, as he wanted to do in his intention, by making dramatic music and the picture of the Ch pop up for a split second on the screen
ReplyDeleteAchieved a dramatic tone through use of dialogue and suspenseful music throughout.
ReplyDeleteThe trailer was super funny, but also very dramatic. He accomplished this with the music, sound effects, and video editing.
ReplyDeleteHe created a dramatic tone throughout the trailer by using suspenseful music.
ReplyDeleteEric did a great job of accomplishing every one of his intentions, he created a dramatic tone, had two characters give up, and saved the climax for the end.
ReplyDeleteThis was very funny and the intentions clearly came across. A dramatic tone came across the trailer, and it left the audience wanting to watch until the dramatic end.
ReplyDeleteThe music and speed of the clips made the trailer dramatic.
ReplyDeleteHe does a good job of accomplishing his intention of having a dramatic tone, and it being suspenseful
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ReplyDeleteGood use of music to create suspense. Also using black screen with suspenseful music helped create suspense.
ReplyDeleteThe music really helped to develop the dramatic tone of the video. Along with the stressed out mannerisms of the characters, the intention to create a dramatic tone was very clear.
ReplyDeleteIt was really funny. I feel he did a very good job and he followed all of his intentions. The video did what he wanted it to and that's good.
ReplyDeleteYou definitely achieved having people on the edge of their seat by having us wonder what CH is.
ReplyDeleteThe tone of the film was very dramatic because of the music and tone of voice from the narrator. The third goal was met because it had the audience curious and confused.
ReplyDeleteEric effectively hit each on of his intentions. It was done exactly how he intended by creating a dramatic tone, having different characters feel different way, and ultimately saving the climax for the end.
ReplyDeleteAbe Ancis: Eric successfully conveyed a dramatic tone in the quest to find the ch. The film was intense yet extremely funny.
ReplyDeleteEric’s third goal was achieved because the audience was very confused. The camera cuts added to the suspense as well as the choice of music.
ReplyDeletethrough the use of music a suspenseful tone was created, also camera cuts helped.
ReplyDeleteThe dramatic made the film very intense and when the CH was found it was intense.
ReplyDeleteCreates a great climax with the use of editing and music.
ReplyDeleteI thought your trailer and screenplay was so funny. I really liked how creative it was.
ReplyDeletefunny clip and had a dramatic tone through the music in preview.
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