Technology takes over is a film about three college students, Annmarie, Mary, and Carol, who become more and more dependent on technology by saving all of their most important information on their phones and computers, they start to realize some strange things going on around them. They start to notice more and more how they feel they are being watched, but they notice too late. Something has been tracking their every move and watching them constantly for months, little do they know the thing they trusted the most, the internet, has backstabbed them and is not blackmailing them to do what it wants so their personal information isn't released. As they realize things are getting more and more serious, they know they have to do something to stop this. They are informed they are not allowed to discuss any of this with anyone else or their information will automatically be released. they have to fin a way to stop the internet before the internet stops them.
Student Cast
Mary- Jacey Deleu
Annmarie- Juliana Oelkers
Carol- Dianna Oelkers
Christina- Lauren Danko
Ideal Cast
Mary-Nina Dobrev
Annmarie- Selena Gomez
Carol- Julianne Hough
Christina- Jennifer Lawrence
https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B3h5qsC08Xv8dlczSTBnWHVKYTQ
The action blocks build up suspense and keep the reader interested in the rest of the screenplay wanting to read more.
ReplyDeleteJoanna did a great job with creating and building up suspense. Through the whole screenplay the reader was waiting for something good to happen.
ReplyDeleteGood use of action blocks to help make the plot and their actions clear. They also helped build up suspense by showing whats going on
ReplyDeletemet goal #1 by having the very advanced technology basically spy on the characters, and it threatens to blackmail them.
ReplyDeleteThe action blocks helped build suspense and made the story easier to follow. Her first goal was met by having technology that is more advanced. The technology blackmails them because it has their private information.
ReplyDeleteYou met your first goal by the phone sending texts threatening that there's no use to get the police involved and how they won't be any help.
ReplyDeleteAll her goals were met, specifically through the actions blocks and the blackmail
ReplyDeleteBy having the technology spy on them and threaten to blackmail them she was able to accomplish her intention of showing how the technology is becoming very advanced.
ReplyDeleteAbe: I like how potentially real world this story could be in some aspects. I think the action blocks were well placed. The action blocks made the story more clear and concise.
ReplyDeleteby having threats sent to the college students your first intention was clearly met, overall very interesting screenplay
ReplyDeleteBy having the technology blackmail them, you created suspense.
ReplyDeleteYou can see that technology is becoming very advanced by having it spy on people and this can also be seen through the action blocks.
ReplyDeletethe first intention was met through the threats and the technology blackmailing the students.
ReplyDeleteIntention three was met because the screenplay was very suspenseful. The suspense was built through both dialogue and the action blocks
ReplyDeleteThe screeplay had a suspensful tone to it. The suspense was created nicely through action blocks and dialogue. Accomplished the 3rd intention.
ReplyDeletescreenplay was suspenseful, this was created through dialogue and 3rd intention was accomplished.
ReplyDeleteThis screenplay accomplished the goals and was really suspenseful.
ReplyDeleteShows how advanced the technology has become by having it interact in a threatening way with the cast.
ReplyDeleteSuspenseful tone throughout screenplay through use of a dialogue. Also a very suspenseful ending.
ReplyDeleteThe suspenseful tone present throughout the whole screenplay was evident and proved to be necessary as it added to the ending. Overall well done.
ReplyDeleteCreated suspense through out the story, by the dialogue between a character.
ReplyDeleteaccomplished first intention by having advanced technology.
ReplyDelete