A young boy named Riley finds himself in a world full of magic after discovering a wand and finally getting his acceptance letter to Hogwarts. Riley has only just turned eleven and does not understand the danger that waits with Voldemort’s return. His parents are hesitant in letting him attend due to the war that just broke out last June but Riley already knows he has magical capabilities and is of pureblood heritage. His father makes the decision in letting him attend Hogwarts instead of holding him back until the war ends. As soon he finishes getting his school supplies, he boards the Hogwarts Express at King’s Cross Station. On the train, he meets two other boys the same age. All of them are nervous about their first year; discuss what house they hope to be placed in.
As the story progresses Riley and the two other boys he met on the train are placed in Slytherin house. He becomes close friends with them as they share a common hatred toward Harry Potter. They side with Voldemort because he wants only purebloods to attend Hogwarts. The boys come up with a plan to prevent mudbloods from learning magic. They go to extreme lengths to fulfill this plan which involves putting themselves in danger in order to achieve it. In this crazy plan, the trio breaks hundreds of school rules in an attempt to prevent all the mudbloods from learning magic at Hogwarts. Their plan eventually falls apart as someone catches them trying to hide the stolen school supplies in a girl’s bathroom. At the end of the story, the audience sees that the chaos results in cosmos as Dumbledore does not expel them and it is clear that the boys learned their lesson. This story gives another perspective of the Harry Potter world through the eyes of children that side with Voldemort instead of Harry Potter.
Ideal Cast
Mom- Kristen Bell
Dad- Tom Cruise
Riley- Mason Cook
Orion- Nolan Gould
Cyrus- Aiden Flowers
Student Cast
Mom- Brianna Perfetti
Dad- Abe Ancis
Riley- John Murzaku
Orion- Michael Loh
Cyrus- Mikey Botta
Met goal #2 by having the boys seem very secretive and using nighttime as the setting to help make their actions seem much more mischievous.
ReplyDeleteMet the second goal by the setting and being sneaky and also goal one was met because the ending seemed like a plot twist.
ReplyDeleteYou accomplished on meeting your second goal by having them talk in secrecy about their plans.
ReplyDeleteBy having the boy's talk secretly and making the setting as nighttime he was able to accomplish the intention of creating a mischievous plot.
ReplyDeleteThe secrecy in the screenplay achieved the second goal. This screenplay was very interesting if you've read the Harry Potter books
ReplyDeleteGoal 2 was met of a mischievous plot by having the setting mainly at night in strange places.
ReplyDeleteYou achieved the second intention by having the setting and dialogue be mischievous.
ReplyDeleteAbe Ancis: Intention 2 was completed by having the plans in secrecy.
ReplyDeleteGood job creating a secretive, dark, tone through their dialogue and making the setting at night.
ReplyDeleteending was not what i expected to happen, goal #1 was achieved by doing that, goof job
ReplyDeleteIntention 2 was met by having the boys talk about their plans in secret. Making it at night instead of the day made it even more mischievous and gives it a more hush tone.
ReplyDeletehis second intention was met through the boys being very secretive.
ReplyDeleteThe second intention was accomplished because the plans were discussed and planned in secret to make a mischievous atmosphere. This draws in the audience in and keeps them entertained.
ReplyDeletethe third goal was achieved because in the original series, the story revolved around harry and his friends, but now there is a new character we can see.
ReplyDeletethe second intention was hit by having the characters be very secretive.
ReplyDeleteGoal 1 was accomplished with the ending. The ending was not expected at all.
ReplyDeleteThe ending came out of nowhere and the entire story kept me guessing and was very mischievous.
ReplyDeleteGoal 2 was met by having the boys be very secretive. Keeping their plans of mischief to themselves helped to create a secretive tone.
ReplyDeleteI was impressed by the unexpected ending. Specifically goal 2 was accomplished by having the boys be so low key. This added to the abrupt ending.
ReplyDeleteMet intention #2 by creating a sneaky tone through out the story.
ReplyDeletecreated a secretive tone which helped meet goal #2
ReplyDeleteGoal 2 was accomplished by having the boys plans be a secret.
ReplyDeletesecond intention was met with having the boys be secretive.
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