Also in the film, we meet Aaron's team members, Xavier West, Grant Jackson, and Taylor Anderson. Once they discover that their teammate and friend has gone missing they spend hours on end looking through video footage and tracking the van's license plate number in order to find the man who took Aaron. After a brief amount of time they are sent a video feed of Aaron, showing him in his current situation bound and locked in a room, and then Taylor being a great research analysis, uses her skills to track the IP address from where the video is being sent from. They find the address and speed away to track down the mysterious man who is hurting their friend. Will they find their friend before it's too late for him or just in time?
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Ideal Cast:
John Kingsley- Joe Mantegna
Aaron Black- Matthew Gray Gubler
Xavier West- Thomas Gibson
Grant Jackson- Shemar Moore
Taylor Anderson- A.J. Cook
met goal #1 by creating suspense and anticipation throughout the screenplay, as well as by having them not find Aaron until the very end
ReplyDeleteSuspense is throughout the screenplay because she's trying to find her friends. The dialogue helps add to the fear of the characters.
ReplyDeleteYou were able to meet your first goal by creating suspense throughout the entire screenplay
ReplyDeleteSuspense in the screenplay made it more interesting for the reader
ReplyDeleteAbe Ancis: The first goal was reached by creating that suspense that we would expect from a story titled "PAY BACK".
ReplyDeleteGood job accomplishing goal one by having suspense throughout.
ReplyDeleteYou accomplished on meeting your third goal by the scene where Grant is trying to shoot at the tire and Taylor is yelling at him.
ReplyDeleteThe hunt and the mysterious man helped to achieve your goal of creating suspense.
ReplyDeleteSuspense was created throughout the whole film by not having closure till the end.
ReplyDeletethe first intention was met by creating suspense throughout the entirety of the screenplay
ReplyDeleteThe fact that they did not find Aaron until the very end accomplished her 1st intention by building a feeling of suspense.
ReplyDeleteAccomplished intention #1 by having the suspense because Aaron was not found until the end.
ReplyDeleteYou met your first goal by incorporating suspense throughout the entirety of the story.
ReplyDeleteHunting for the mysterious character throughout the story, helped her accomplish her first intention.
ReplyDeletesuspense was created by not being able to find aaron until the end.
ReplyDeleteFirst intention was met by having suspense throughout the screenplay. This was done through use of the group searching for Aaron and not discovering him till the end.
ReplyDeleteThe feeling of suspense was most prevalent considering they didn't find the boy until the end of the screenplay. She achieved her intention by doing that.
ReplyDeleteOnce again, suspense was present throughout the screenplay and executed well. This was done through the search of Aaron up until the end of the screen play.
ReplyDeletesuspense was creating by not knowing what was going to happen next.
ReplyDeletethe goals were accomplished. There was a lot of suspense throughout the screen play.
ReplyDeleteThe whole story is suspenseful and the dialogue she uses shows the fear in the characters.
ReplyDeletethe suspense throughout the story helped meet goal #1 and made the story interesting to read
ReplyDeleteAccomplished goal one by adding suspense in the screenplay.
ReplyDeleteaccomplished intention of incorporating suspense
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