Brianna Lamoureux- Bigfoot
In my new movie, Bigfoot, two friends Kevin and Dave, played by Zac Efron and Dave Franco, venture into the woods in search of Bigfoot. Efron and Franco are usually seen in comedies but for this film must take on new characters in this action packed mystery. Efron's character Kevin is smart and very outdoorsy. Throughout the movie you can continuously see him take control and be overconfident in his abilities. Kevin is cocky and a bit of a know it all and is the exact opposite of his friend. Franco's character Dave is very different in the fact that he is more cautious and not as educated. Right from the start the audience can tell Dave isn't as comfortable as Kevin in the woods. These contrasting personalities set up the perfect situations for the friends to learn from each other and build their friendship even stronger. Although good things can come from this variation the audience will soon find out it is not all positive. Many may think Bigfoot is the threat in this movie but their differences could be even more troubling. At the climax the characters and the audience will be experiencing many difficult conflicts where big decisions must be made between the two friends. These suspenseful scenes will have the viewers on the edge of their seats and wanting to know what happens next. Will Kevin and Dave be able to overcome their contrasting views? Will the two friends find and expose Bigfoot? And will they even make it out alive? The only way to find out is to watch the film and see for yourself. It is a great movie for people of all ages and will give people a new perspective on friendship. If you like action, mystery, and surprises around every corner then this is the movie for you.
Ideal Cast:
Kevin- Zac Efron
Dave-Dave Franco
Link:
https://drive.google.com/a/sparta.org/file/d/0B9F3NV9ZxcD4Y2FkU2lpd09YZmc/view?usp=sharing
Met goal #2 by making the screenplay suspenseful and exciting. In certain scenes, the reader is left in anticipation of what will happen next, keeping them interested
ReplyDeleteNice story. Your second goal was met by making it very exciting and suspenseful.
ReplyDeleteYou could definitely feel the suspense in the climax, the audience really wanted to know what the decision would be.
ReplyDeleteThe screenplay was suspenseful and interesting to read
ReplyDeleteGreat character development and has a mysterious ending.
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your story, it was different but good. You achieved the intention where you wanted to have the friendship grow, and have a suspenseful ending.
ReplyDeleteThis screenplay was very descriptive in both dialogue and action blocks which kept the audience's attention throughout the script. The ending was a cliffhanger which kept the audience questioning as well.
ReplyDeleteYou achieved the intention of suspense by keeping the audience on their toes with the intense action blocks and climax.
ReplyDeleteAbe Ancis: The intention of achieving ultimate suspense was successfully conveyed.
ReplyDeleteThe third intention was met by Dave and Kevin not knowing where Bigfoot is.
ReplyDeleteshe accomplished her second intention because during the climax it was very suspenseful and it kept the audience's attention.
ReplyDeleteGood job achieving your goal through the characterization of Kevin and Dave
ReplyDeleteYour intentions were met by having suspense conveyed in the story, having the characterization of Kevin and Dave, and having the dialogue descriptive.
ReplyDeletecreated suspense and a mysterious ending
ReplyDeleteShe uses parentheticals to set the tone and action blocks to describe what is going on when people aren't talking and it really helped her accomplish her second intention because she was able to use the parentheticals and action blocks to make is suspenseful and keep the audience interested.
ReplyDeleteGood characters and good screenplay. The suspensful tone kept me reading the whole story.
ReplyDeletesuspenseful tone and i loved the ending.
ReplyDeleteSuspenseful tone was created throughout the screenplay through use of action blocks and dialogue. Ending was also suspenseful and leaves readers wondering what will happen next.
ReplyDeleteYou created a creepy tone through the screenplay which gave into the mystery you wanted to create. You achieved your third goal by doing that.
ReplyDeleteCreepy yet suspenseful tone fit the overall intentions of the screenplay. The suspense was particularly key in this story due to the fact that it kept me interested throughout the story.
ReplyDeleteGood job of making the story suspenseful and exciting.
ReplyDeleteThis story creates plenty of suspense and mystery through the characters dialogue.
ReplyDeleteyour goals were accomplished. I liked how there as a lot of suspense throughout the screenplay.
ReplyDeletegood job of making suspense and having the characters developed well
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